Tuesday, March 12, 2013
leannes fanfic draft
characters
dr temperance 'bones brennan
special agent seely booth
Angela hodgins
Jack hodgins
Zack Addy
setting; Jeffersonian lab
part one
It was 9am when Dr Temperance Brennan opened the door to the Jeffersonian the weather was chilly her breath came out as cold air, shutting the door behind her she ran to turn on the air conditoning on to take the chill of the air.
Half an hour later all her team came in the door wrapped up in warm clothes which they shredded as soon as they got in the door. Okay Dr Brennan turned to her team we are going to start going through the Jane does that are sitting the the morgue downstairs s we can send them back to there families for a proper burial.
The first one was brought up so Brennan put on her gloves and set to work determining to piece the skull together so that Angela could put it though the id programme so that they can determine the id of the victim.
Jack Addy came over cup of coffee in hand you should take a break Dr Brennan its been 2 hours since you started Brennan looked at him and then stretched her back was sore from all the bending over, she then took the coffee and handed the skull to Zack have Angela run this ill be in my office waiting for results she called over her shoulder as she walked away.
Special Agent Seely Booth walked into the Jeffersonian he hated the place it smelled like a hospital anti-septic he swiped his card over the console at the stairs and headed up "wheres Brennan he asked Jack Addy who was sitting looking through a microscope shes in her office said Addy looking up from his work and pointed Booth walked in that direction and Zack went back to his work.
Booth knocked on the door Brennan was working on her computer she looked up and smiled at him
"hey whats up"
"not much just catching up in paperwork"
"well shut down and come have lunch with me"
"one second ill grab my coat"
They walked out the office and booth shut the door behind them
Im going to lunch Brennan said to Zach who was still working on the microscope he did not look up just waved his hand
"so where are we going" Brennan asked as they walked to the car
"the dinner?"
'no we are not we are going to an little italian restraurant i know o okay
The restaurant was small it had green tiles in the wall the the chef came over himself and took there order
"
you know him i presume"said Brennan
"yes i come here often the food is very good"
so asked Brennan what did you want to talk to me about
"what you mean" said Booth an innocent look on his face
"you would not have invited me to lunch if you ddint want to talk about something"
"okay you got me i wanted to talk about our relationship"
He stopped speaking the waiters came over with plates ladened with food Bones did not know how hungry she was untill the aroma of food hit her nostrils she picked up her fork and attacked the food
"
well we cant deny that we have feelings for each other" ,
'wow this food is good"
" Bones im trying to be serious"
o sorry continue
"well we have been working together for months now and there are rumours going around the lab that we are dating so we might as well make it official"
Bones just looked at Booth with a blank stare
"what you haven't heard come on bones give it a chance"
" i never date someone i work with anyway we are already partners in a work sense"
"ill think about it" said bones getting up from the table i got to get back to work.
Brennan arrived back at the Jeffersonian Angela was waiting in her office not now she said before Angela opened her mouth i got an Id on the victim Angela said holding up a sketch the woman is 24 yr old Claire Davis disappeared from a party at the university of Queens last July her boyfriend reported her missing when she failed to call or come home after the party, the sketch showed a woman with blonde hair , green eyes and freckles on her nose.
"pretty girl" Brennan commented
"yer its a darn shame"
"yer the poor girl was killed then cut up and thrown into a suitcase according to the inicial report made
by the coroner when she was found, they never got further then that as they didnt have the high tech equipment we have to ID her
Now we know who she is we can send her home to her family who can finally know what happened to there girl.
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Hi Leanne,
ReplyDeleteGreat start! Very intriguing!
As an intro I wonder if all these 'words' are necessary?
I think this could be edited and pared down a bit, leaving more room for later events.
Can't wait!
I like this (: It started out pretty good. I love Bones. Just a tip: watch your punctuation. I'm not perfect and even I struggle with punctuation sometimes, but sometimes your sentences seem to run together when they shouldn't. Also keep an eye on those capitals. But other than that, great story, and I can't wait to read the finished story!
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