Thursday, March 28, 2013
leannes final fanfic
characters
Dr Temperance "Bones" Brennan
Dr Zach Addy (her assistant)
Angela Hodgins (best friend)
Jack Hodgins
Dr Brennan opened the door to the Jeffersonian. The weather was cold, it showed when she inserted the key in the lock and the imprints her fingers made on the glass pane.
Walking up the stairs she scanned her card and got to work getting ready for the day ahead.
Half an hour later her team came in dressed in warm clothing, which they shredded as soon as they entered the foyer. She gave them a few minutes to get settled.
"Right" she said turning to her team, "today we are going through the morgue to try to ID all the Jane Does we have and give them back to their families for proper burials."
The first victim was brought up. Brennan pulled on her gloves and got to work on the skull trying to piece it back together.
"Dr Brennan".
She looked up to see Zach standing there.
"You have been working for two hours straight on that skull - you should take a break."
Dr Brennan stretched her sore back and handed the completed skull to Zach.
'Give this to Angela to run through the ID program. I'll be in my office." she called over her shoulder.
Brennan entered her office. She sighed , there was a huge pile of filling on her desk.
She sat behind her desk and got to work.
Angela knocked on Brennan's door. Brennan looked up.
"I got a ID on the body". Angela brings up a picture.
"Meet Claire Davis 24,she went missing after her university had a christmas party.
"Her boyfriend reported her missing, after she failed to turn up or call after the party".
'The police questioned the boyfriend, but as there was no body at the time the case went cold, they figured she had just done a runner."
"The body turned up here a year later, after a big storm, must have been buried in the storm drains as they flood and bring up some nasty stuff."
The picture showed a blonde hair, blue eyed girl with freckles dotting her nose.
"Pretty girl.'
"Yes it is a damn shame too."
"Well at least the family will know what happened to there little girl , and finally bury her."
Angela left the room to start getting the ball rolling so that poor Claire could go back to her family.
Brennan walked to her desk, she had to get this paperwork done before any one else decided to interupt her.
Angela knocked on the door to Brennan's office, she was sat behind the computer very fixed on it.
"You eaten?".
Brennan held up a sandwich wrapper.
"Okay well its 6 o'lock i think you should wrap up and go home sweetie'.
Brennan just nodded and closed down the computer.
Angela went to search out her husband Hodgins so they could go home, as she had some news she wanted to share.
Brennan was the last to leave the building , when she walked to her car it was getting dark. She started the engine and headed home, thinking about what she was gonna have for dinner that night.
links
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8744583/14/Dedicated-To-The-One-I-Love
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9121011/1/Soul-Mates
www.fanfiction.net/tv/Bones/3
http://www.wattpad.com/story/404015-the-bones-in-the-serial-grave-a-bones-criminal
this story is good there are only 3 chapters to this but it does the 3 parts really well i like the fact that bones and criminal minds are both included as well awesome. the writer really got the personalities of the bones characters across i never watch criminal minds so i cant say bout that but he takes to popular shows and puts them together really well.
dedicated to the one i love
i read this to the end and it is so cheesy it not funny but im a big fan of this. Angela puts an app on booth and brennans phones so they can tell each other how they feel as they never seem to be able to say the words and it has a great ending too .
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Hey Leanne. Good topic, but it feels like too much is happening in one story and I think someone commented this on a previous draft. She's doing too much; perhaps you could have just focused on one part of the story and written it in more detail.
ReplyDeleteHowever, overall I think you wrote Brennan really well. You certainly captured the basics of the TV character's personality.
thanks for the feedback bones is my favourite so it good that i can bring out the personalitys.
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